A Lover Of Sorts Comments
He gives me that look
and I know what's coming.
I set down my book and we get to it.
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A masterful write, Lori... hope your brain never runs out of paper. Brian
I gave it a 10, I thought it was going in a diffrent direction, , , , , Than what I anticipated
Lori...I think this is great, except for the 5th stanza, which took me away from the situation (it could be dropped) , and the last three lines would be better in a couplet, which would be easy to organize without losing anything. Take care, John
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7/27/2025 4:20:15 PM # 1.0.0
Uh huh, done that. Just wonderful. Lori. More, please... Regards, Don