A Lover Of Sorts Comments

Uh huh, done that. Just wonderful. Lori. More, please... Regards, Don

A masterful write, Lori... hope your brain never runs out of paper. Brian

Another beautifully written poem. Just wonderful! ~Ray

I gave it a 10, I thought it was going in a diffrent direction, , , , , Than what I anticipated

Lori...I think this is great, except for the 5th stanza, which took me away from the situation (it could be dropped) , and the last three lines would be better in a couplet, which would be easy to organize without losing anything. Take care, John