Sunday, October 17, 2004

A Lover From The Past Comments

Rating: 4.1

I knew you'd have a fuller figure
But never thought that you'd be bigger
Than the side of any house
And me as skinny as a mouse
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David Keig
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Jerrica Juarez 04 March 2008

Once again so cute..... this one made me also want to keep reading..... It was really good one though..... =)

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Timothy Werner 19 December 2004

Cute, nice punch.Short though, I'de like to keep reading.

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knot Available 04 November 2004

not sure if i like this one. i hope it is figurative.

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