Friday, May 29, 2009

A Lover Comments

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i am a lover,
a true lover i am,

i am a shoulder to cry,
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vamsi krishna
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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

'love is blind deaf and dumb.' Excellent conclusion.10++

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 30 May 2009

awesome read.........enjoyed it..! ! ! .. :)

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Seema Aarella 30 May 2009

You come out with the musings of a lover very well...a lover is a man afterall....nice composition! ! ! ! ! !

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

love is blind, deaf and dumb? ..well, if we are in love, we will do everything..grace

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the para i am shoulder to cry ete seems confusing the meaning and need language correction. consult some one and correct before publishing so that a good poem will not go soiled. expression excelent. shan

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Mona Martinez 30 May 2009

i really enjoyed reading it. i love the last line, because it is very true.

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Chitra - 29 May 2009

love and its side effects...well said

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Lovely love poem,10+

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