Friday, August 6, 2021
A Lovely Pink Lotus Comments
Rating: ★3.5
When I looking towards sky
Light touches my face and says hi
Blowing wind kisses my chicks and doing Hi-Fi
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8/1/2025 11:00:07 PM # 1.0.0
There are a few grammatical errors in this. First, It should 'I am looking. And i would say towards the sky and not 'towards sky.' It sounds it bit odd. The writing is too loose and the rhyme has too many clichés to work fine. I want to help you.