When I looking towards sky
Light touches my face and says hi
Blowing wind kisses my chicks and doing Hi-Fi
That's time I am a happy guy
Morning light in my eyes like a spark
It Wants to vanish my past dark
Night was full of fear
And now light asking me to switch the gear
At night I had cold blood
a shut bud surrounded by mud
But Mr Grower blows on me his blissful focus
I realised that I am a lovely pink lotus
As Mr Grower goes high and high
Miss Bees started kissing me and then fly
One guy sat near bank on his knees
He watches me from hour, I don't know what he sees
Do you?
By Lalit Vivekanand Kamble
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There are a few grammatical errors in this. First, It should 'I am looking. And i would say towards the sky and not 'towards sky.' It sounds it bit odd. The writing is too loose and the rhyme has too many clichés to work fine. I want to help you.