Wednesday, July 26, 2006

A Lovely Lass Comments

Rating: 4.3

Our lovely Sadie, is a lovely lady,
A lady shrewd, a lady who'd
Give a guy, the winking eye,
Then turn with a giggle, and give him a wiggle
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 28 February 2008

This one made me chuckle, sounds like my type of girl. Lovely flow to it too. Well written. Andrew x

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2008

I'm convinced. Give me her number, I'm already in love. Of course, I'm a romantic, so it could just be me. But that poem sure did help her case, and that's a good sign of good writing. Bravo. Greenwolfe 1962

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 October 2007

a beautiful poem, quite enjoying, well penned yet, thanks

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2007

When at first i saw this title, i said...hey, it's not like Ernestine to write about her lovliness....but what the hey...let me read & decide on my own..And so glad i did! And i wondered how i didn't catch this one long ago...And true to the humble young lass you be....this work was not at all about thee... But it was great...and fluxing & crafted as all your versatile verings are...Brilliantly! FjR

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Catastrophe King 30 July 2006

A sure 10/10 - I VOTE..... I am really overwhelmed to see you smoothly drive through those words... you are an artist! GOOD WORK.

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Duncan Wyllie 26 July 2006

Yes, when two become one, a love so strong, This is clever Ernestine Thankyou Love duncan X

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