Sunday, May 24, 2009

A Lovely Family Comments

Rating: 4.2

A lovely family
Is like the living tree,
Which bears love’s tendency,
Peaceful for all to be.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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David Beckham 31 July 2010

A loving family is like the living tree....and then I pause to ponder....HOW TRUE! ! ! great job. Love your style of writing.

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Supriya Prathapan 28 March 2010

In this modern materialistic world where people have no morals and most families in the urban world can rightly be called failures, this poem is indeed refreshing.10++

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Zachary Clark 19 October 2009

Being set free by having good morals with your family this is a grand piece I loved it.

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Kathleen Bartholomew 11 October 2009

The poem is honest and a change to read about a moral outlook. It is what God gives as a gift and so many people don't care abot each other. Well done for reminding us of that Kathleen Bartholomew

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 31 August 2009

Lovely poem of 'A Lovely Family' your poem says so much of what a family is: a tree is like a living tree which bear's love tendency-such a beautiful line that says it all.Read my poem 'I dote myself' a poem about myself as a living tree. I rate this lovely poem a 10+++

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yesss a lovely family.

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yes. these are the signs of a lovely family

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A lovely family Is like the living tree, Which bears love’s tendency, Peaceful for all to be. it is desire to live in a family free from any worry and with peace...10 read mine desire... mary to marry

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 July 2009

Hi Obinna, what an inspiring poem. I spent 3 days at a family reunion a week ago and this poem thunderously speaks of the value of a loving family.I captured the beauty of clouds and the earth in my poem 'Gazing From Airplane's pane' that carried over into the beauty of family members-many whom I'd never meet but, seeing our progenitors' offsprings moved me to tears...that tree lives on. thanks, again for this lovely poem! a 10

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Konjit Berhane 08 June 2009

nice one here..the idea is pretty clear and Great... i loved it and enjoyed it

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Luwi Habte 07 June 2009

this is so great nice exolanation all is truth thanks for sharing

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Indira Renganathan 07 June 2009

The concept of family till today is that much important...nice write

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 04 June 2009

Happy Birthday Obinna -a lovely write, a family is indeed a tree...that's where your roots are. May it grow straight and true always Cindy

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a warm and beatiful poem..happy birthday obinna..10+++

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Ency Bearis 04 June 2009

nice theme...family is like a tree and yes indeed it is...nice write....10

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

congratulations on your happy family and lots of peace and joy abound before I forget heres wishing you a Very Happy Birthday. May God pour his choicest blessings on you anjalli

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Sandra Fowler 03 June 2009

As positive as a sunny day with not a cloud in sight. Lovely. Wishing you and your family blue skies all the way. Kind regards, Sandra

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Tess Bybee 03 June 2009

This is a great poem. Very positive

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

oh man...i wish your lovely family willl present you with a lovely gift to your tomorow.......on the day this lovely person came to this lovely world.... with lots of love shan

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Sandra Martyres 03 June 2009

The role and the importance of a lovely family life is nicely portrayed in this poem...good work.

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