I dream of an ocean
Dolphins enjoying themselves
Sharks out for hunt
All the penguins in front.
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Hmmm a Prayer perhaps? ..... Thankful for life..for love.. and the imagination to describe all creatures great and small....
WOW! ! great! You have meticulously described different parts of mother earth and expressed your own feelings at the same time. COOL!
yes Amen! ! nature's esteem ethnicity! God's wonderful creation! while reading this i remember my homestate Kerala is otherwise known as God's own country! nice creation loved it!
Yes, of the love of nature we can always be sure of. Dreaming about the person we fancy, brings forth many uncertainties. Sometimes dreams are better than reality. Beautiful poem...
beautiful poem Jinal, , , it makes me think how we take nature for granted, many of don't care about it.a very good write my friend...
Beautiful and feel so much innocence running in my smile while reading this poem..It really nice and got wonderful flavor..so free and true! ! -Unwritten Soul
Hmm a prayer perhaps.... a beautifull desription of all things great and small