Thursday, March 12, 2015

A Lovely Date Comments

Rating: 4.8

Dear peacock when you dance in a forest,
It’s the beauty itself that dances with you,
Can you tell me how do you love and the rest?
How your beloved romances with you?
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Khalida Bano Ali 23 July 2015

What a beautiful poem! .........................10

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Hazel Durham 13 March 2015

Beautiful imagery and inspired lines that shine with the beauty of your words!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2015

Dear dove while flies manages to be loved. The secrets of the waves are written by dolphin. Very wonderful and powerful presentation of this poem amazes the mind of reader. Great poet excellent poem shared really. Nicely penned.

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Valsa George 12 March 2015

It is a pleasure reading your poems and seeing the accompanying pictures!

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Salini Nair 12 March 2015

beautiful....well crafted....like each lines......

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Khalid Saifullah 12 March 2015

A sweet and stylish love poem....................10

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