Wednesday, August 20, 2014

A Lovely Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon is not too high,
Not so high in the sky,
Why its light is cool?
In a starry blue pool,
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2020

Childhood displayed in a subtle manner, nicely portrayed. Thank you for sharing.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 22 August 2014

Oh what nice poem. Beauty of moon, Chandny and her naughtiness very nicely penned. You are a great poet and I always like your style and I want to follow this beautiful style but you know I am... I always feel good after reading your poems.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

A very cute poem for a cute child. Mother tells different stories to make the child just drink a glass of milk. finally convince the child to have it. With all the words, which mother has told, child sleeps in a beautiful dream. Loved reading it. Beautiful flow of words.

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Valsa George 21 August 2014

The innocence of childhood so beautifully described! Also the tricks mothers usually employ to make the child fastidious about food to have a glass of milk and also to put the naughty child to sleep! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 August 2014

A lovely description of childhood.

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