The sun keep on shining high
With sweet and tender smiles
As melody of rhythm fill the sky
with scents of joy more than mile.
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love lost is heart lost...beautiful write in good rhythm and rhyme expressing the pain of love that lost...good work, Melvin...10
I sorta like that one ^_^ it is...sweet in an odd way...kind of.
'when you gifted me infidelity I hung my guitar to rest eternally. ' Very moving lines from an accomplished poet. I enyoyed reading this poem.
A soul touching piece of work I loved this poetry...........the way you put it but when you gifted me infidelity I hung my guitar to rest eternally.........lovely way to express sorrow......
my favorite line here is, I hung my guitar to rest eternally-it is very meaningful, it says many things, and i see the picture you want to paint on this poem. you are good at words, you express well. Mabuhay ang Manunulang Pinoy sa Poemhunter.