Monday, June 15, 2009

A Love To Call My Own Comments

Rating: 4.6

I knew from the beginning
That you were just a flirt,
But yet I fell in love with you
Knowing I'd be hurt.
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shilpa Poetess
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Meredith B. 28 February 2023

Bro quit trying to claim the poem. It's a piece of art and if one of y'all wrote it then good job. If you really did write it however, I feel like you wouldn't tell everyone that on a poem site.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 26 February 2023

An obvious case of plagiarism. More than one person claims to have written this poem. Some say they read it more than 50 years ago. Shame on you, Shilpa, for claiming it as your own.

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I think the name was Patricia Baldwin. I am not sure anyway

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Shilpa, this is not your poem. I have read this as a child, and the was an English lady, I can't recall her name. It is absurd…

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Florence Conlee 14 January 2023

I memorized this poem 50 years ago first time I have been able to find it. Thank you

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Tyh 19 October 2021

Found this poem in the 1970's and copied to my fav poems book!

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Jean Palmer 15 November 2017

This poem was published in Teen Magazine in the early 1970's. It was written by me under my name then, Jean Burr Smith. I wrote it when I was fifteen.

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Melissa Red 22 July 2021

I love this poem thank you for writing it!

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D Pfredri 27 March 2013

i want to thank everyone for there wonderful comment and am so glad that so many enjoy it. however shilpa Poetess is not the author of this poem i wrote it over 40 years ago. DC

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 September 2009

When you ask for me again You'll find I won't be there I want a love to call my own Not one I have to share......................ingeniously curved over flow of love, yet utterly passionate that enlightens heart to croon...beautifully rhymed,10++, thanks for sharing

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patricia baldwin 26 October 2021

i wrote this poem when i was 25... thanks for stealing it.

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Musical Notes 02 September 2009

I am overwelhmed with emotions... how so very realistic.....lovely

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Pose 04 November 2021

I read this in 1975 after i lost someone and it hit home

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patricia baldwin 31 March 2022

i wrote this when i was 25, it was going to be put in a poem book, i can recite this by heart. so many people claim its theirs. its annoying. this is about my ex husband luke he has passed away since and its very dumb how people do this. this is pla

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Priyanka Bhowmick 01 July 2009

nice poem.. well portrayed.. but it's a waste of time spending a life in the thoughts of a flirt...for they rarely change... better to think of future.

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Vibha Kapoor 29 June 2009

Hey Shilpa, very nice poem.. keep writing

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Afzal Shauq 28 June 2009

For I must hide my broken heart Beneath a laughing face And though you think I never cared No one can take your place good stanza..impressive and interesting..your poem as a whole is done well in romantic way.. poetic flow is inspiring and seems melodious one.. idea is relatively rich too...10+++++++++++

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Soumyendu Biswas 16 June 2009

This is good! Really good...

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