Friday, January 3, 2014

A Love Struck Lament: To One Far Away Comments

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Oh, my angel, if life was half as sweet
As the time I spend by your lovely side!
Life’s challenges I would willingly meet,
Made easier when you with me abide.
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Simon Miller
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2019

Life faces many challenges but still there is hope to meet angel. There is definite hope that God will come and give love. Life is half sweet and half bitter but love is truly sweet. Moving ahead with love to greet is great really. This poem is excellently penned.

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