She rises from Bay of Bengal,
A piece of beauty and charms,
Black hair black eyes, lean and tall,
And when she spreads her arms,
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Wonderful imagination........ The voluptuous journey of rain clouds for a mate and at the moment of consummation, a down pour of ecstatic showers!
Its an excellent poem and I read it for 2 / 3 times and really like the excellent imagination of cloud. Yes only you can make the cloud in that way. My vocabulary is not so strong to express your poem in short. Its a nice poem.
Beautiful write and wonderful imagery. Heart goes back instantly to monsoon rains. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
beautiful write sir. we are also waiting for her to grace upon us.
wow! amazing write! ! i like the rhymes and the flow of your poem! ! beautiful love story.. :)
Dear Bro, Lovely poem with elaborated imagery. Thanks for your appreciation of the poem. I feel so obliged that you read each of my latest poems.
Beautiful and romantic......................................................