Thursday, June 12, 2014

A Love Story Of Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

She rises from Bay of Bengal,
A piece of beauty and charms,
Black hair black eyes, lean and tall,
And when she spreads her arms,
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Khalid Saifullah 15 February 2017

Beautiful and romantic......................................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 December 2014

A beautiful poem.....................10

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Valsa George 24 July 2014

Wonderful imagination........ The voluptuous journey of rain clouds for a mate and at the moment of consummation, a down pour of ecstatic showers!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 16 June 2014

Its an excellent poem and I read it for 2 / 3 times and really like the excellent imagination of cloud. Yes only you can make the cloud in that way. My vocabulary is not so strong to express your poem in short. Its a nice poem.

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Savita Tyagi 15 June 2014

Beautiful write and wonderful imagery. Heart goes back instantly to monsoon rains. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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Ramesh Rai 14 June 2014

beautiful write sir. we are also waiting for her to grace upon us.

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Kirti Sharma 14 June 2014

wow! amazing write! ! i like the rhymes and the flow of your poem! ! beautiful love story.. :)

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V P Mahur 13 June 2014

Dear Bro, Lovely poem with elaborated imagery. Thanks for your appreciation of the poem. I feel so obliged that you read each of my latest poems.

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