Wednesday, July 7, 2010

A Love Story - In Making Comments

Rating: 0.0

He woke up into a dream
With two little purple wings
And fluttered in the blue sky
Feeling so light and free
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Binish Cd 04 January 2012

really a wonderful expression of words.........

0 0 Reply
Diwakar Bhatt 02 July 2011

observant eye of a poet to catch nature's glory where beautiful things keep happening............................

0 0 Reply
Shalini Samuel 18 October 2010

Very well written... Starting lines and the title made me so curious about this Love Story... The way you broke the suspense at the end was splendid...

0 0 Reply
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 July 2010

‘Their union so divine Opened the doors of heaven Angels showered blessings Everything seemed forever’ ~ Please don’t wake me from dream type poem for me…. ‘He’s a pupa, waiting to be a butterfly’ ~ Wow butterfly with kaleidoscopic platy of colors …love it…. Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success