Friday, November 6, 2020

A Love Story Comments

Rating: 4.8

Eyes were eyes and not the shells,
Tears were tears and not the pearls,
Hearts were hearts with a single seat,
Beats were beats but a jingle beat,
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 November 2020

Wow poet..you inspiored us to explore the physics of love, aesthetics and your skillful amalgam of Scientific terms and poetic flow inspires me to find at least 100 more themes to work on. Thanks a million dear revered poet for the sharing. Regards.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 November 2020

But her smile wasn't merely a smile, It was first page of a heart's profile, a very beautiful love story coming from JA JI THEE So lovely

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Suresh Kumar Ek 08 November 2020

Th crest of beauty is explored Here in this beautiful poem

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2020

When it came on a woman's lips, It climbed to the pearl of hair clips, A rose was rose restless among leaves, Waiting for an adventure of the thieves, ....../// wow great; an interesting, fantastic and fabulous loving poem; different taste; like it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 November 2020

A beautiful love story. " But her smile wasn't merely a smile It was first page of a heart's profile." Simply marvelous lines of a great poem. Five Stars!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 November 2020

Really it feels like A fashion parade of words Elegant.

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