A Love Story Comments

Read it for the second time loved it...merry xmas...regards

one needs fire to melt ice... myriad are the facets of love!

The two opposite elements combining into one immutable substance is a lovely way of describing how two people of different backgrounds can unite to form a perfect union, it is the great conflict of love that we never see one another as who they are but who we are. Yet still the elements combine to form some form of relationship. I break thy bones. You scorch my skin. I frost… You melt… I do not know what to expect next. my favorite lines and sums up everything about relationships. Great write

Ah the hot and cold of love told originally in the theme of a heart that has little defence, nice regards

I can simply feel purity in the rendering. The beginning was the biggest strength in the poem, and the genius of the poet reflects in the fact that the strength is not allowed to get lost in the entire theme. Lovely poem on love