Monday, March 10, 2008

A Love Story Comments

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There’s this girl who knew this boy and they were together then a day came that they will always remember it all started off with the girl asking the boy three questions 1st she asked him if he thought she was pretty? The boy shook his head and said no.2nd she asked him if he would want to be with her forever more? The boy shook his head and again said no. Finally she asked him if she were to leave his side would he cry once more the boy shook his head and said no. The girl had heard enough and began to cry, but before she could run the boy had grabbed her arm he looked in her beautiful eyes and told her the truth is this:

Your not pretty your beautiful like the moon and the stars at night, that I don't want but I need to be with you forever more and that I’d die if you ever leave my side so baby stay with me cause your my everything
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nice. i really like it. i think this is a really good poem. truly about love and i can sooo feel it! lol

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Emo Seb 11 March 2008

yo diggity dawg...dis my fave, home slice...and u be saying u aint good at writin? wutevaz! ! ! dis da bomb, my homie frum da hood! ! lol, jk! Much Gangsta Luv (jk, rap sux, even if u like it! !) , Seb

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