A Love Song In Praise Of Nature Comments

Excellent work with good use of FOS and imagery.It looks as if everything is there in short arrangement of words.It is indeed a tribute.

yes what else can a heart want? nature is at its best! when the showers are just starting...! lovely read..enjoyed it!

Dear Savithri, very insightful question; when its a cloudy, rainy season stars and moon or sun would be visible now and then when the clouds scatter and rearrange themselves; otherwise the wording would have been twinkling; instead i used peeping which connotes the above explanaton; comparing me with Mahakavi Bharathiyar is out of your love for me; he is a Superstar; i am an ordinary star in side role

Very eloquent. Your beautiful hymn to nature resonates with this reader. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra