A Love Song For You Comments

a wonderful write...like a soft feather touching my heart.. i love this...very fine ans soft-flowing lines are so captivating..the thoughts are so sweet... 10++ lovelots, Maia

amazing write sir.. imagery is full in this one! and as well as emotion.. the harana is lovely indeed =)

good love song this...brings out fully the sweet thirst inside a loving mind...the last two lines are really good, Melvin...congrats...10

Lovely my friend, clear and fully flowing expression of emotion. Well composed and thought out Melvin.. best wishes Jon