Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night,
The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight.
To thank the moon for her fan-like listening, her generous free flight,
The notes dance on the black sleepy ocean, make it excited and silver white.
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A wondrous love poem with nature's magical gifts presented with d poet's pen.
you are so good especially when you write about the moon
The poem was like a shallow then deep shore line..Wanderous. A soul's craddle.
The poem felt so good to feel, and the title, i loved it! _Unwritten Soul
Beautiful poem! Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night, The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight. Wonderful creation, and beautifully described setting!
Please read my poem QUASI-QUATRAIN for the answer of the question below.
what celestial merry-making! it's an allegory with sensuousness! a feast for imagination! but naturally one is tempted to ask...why this four line composition? ? ?
Wow a beautiful little story, loving image of dancing notes and silver white ocean, thank you!
the words surely glide through the miles in tranquil beauty......