Wednesday, August 24, 2016

A Love Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think I'll end this story with a love song.
I hope that you will also sing along.

The love I'm thinking of is not a person.
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 25 August 2016

Wowww. lovely song, full of warmth n exuberance, depicting contentment n a zest for life. I like how you go back to your past n put in bits n pieces from childhood. You give a glimpse of your whole life in a single poem. Remarkable. A10

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Barry Middleton 25 August 2016

Thanks Nosheen. Perhaps I should write more like that. I'll see what I can do.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 August 2016

That's a beautiful love song that I would sing along to. It reminds me of a song I used to sing by Jim Croce...and I read your poem to his melody. The words and the sentiment are just right. None of us get to stay forever, but I hope you get to stay as long as possible. Its good to be grateful for what is right in this life. Take care.

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Barry Middleton 24 August 2016

Thanks Pamela. This was the last poem in one of my self published books - Horizons. I see one of my oncologists on Monday and the other on Wednesday.It has been a year and a half since I was diagnosed.1 to 5 years is the life expectancy so the clock is ticking. I am dealing with it and my poetry is the main thing that helps me to cope.

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