A Love Song Comments

it's simply beautifull. please keep writing

Lovely poem! Nice reading.

A loving invite to that special person with very interesting choice of words.

its rich and melodious but more then song ebven and what you expressed here is meaningful..multiple meanings are coming out from it.. the combination of words is enough catchy, heart feeling and impressive.. what i like in this poem is a promtion of struggle and courage... liked it.. and you deserve to be called good poetess of children and young generation as well.. pray for your long and happy life..just go on..future is yours...10++++++++++++

This is a very well expressed, written, and beguiling love poem, Jazlle. I liked your phrasing in it very much, as well as your use of singing birds as a metaphor for love that repeated in the final line of each verse. It's quite an accomplished write! Carl.

Simply beautiful. Lucky he who is allowed to wander through the guarding trees and explore. Your words express such velvety softness while the sing the sirens' song.

Jazlle I really admired the way you used the theme of birds to tell your love song. It was beautifully romantic with lovely imagery as well. Well done. Karin Anderson

good love song this...the last stanza lines are temptingly inviting...ten for you, Joan

Ammmmmmazing illustrations indeed!

i know chocolate helps everyone to create; you proves it

Nice invite, with beautiful evocative imagery that suggest Divine inspiration.

amazing love song..i feel like swinging in the hammock..with caress of lovely fairies, singing..very nice... Best Regards, Ency Bearis

i like this poem very much Joan.According to your explanations i don't know where you get it.You must have a very strong feeling or imagination for love and understanding.A kind of very kind psychology you don't know you just have.However you do it you do it! kiss.Chris.

so beautiful thanks for sharing 10