Wednesday, December 3, 2008

A Love So Foul Comments

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Take away the pain that burdens, of a love that is so hardened
Of a filling joy, that is all so coy
This continous heartbreak that will on one dawn, break
a non-so existent love, my emotions must solve
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Wangui Mukiri 20 January 2009

Love can really be foul. Love does stink at times yet we find it almost impossible to be without it. You have put it so well and vividly it feels real. Its like some bitter sweet symphony. This is a marvelous piece. I love it. very impressive. Regards, Wangui Mukiri

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2008

A nice piece of work.Keep on writing that we will also learn from you.Thanks a lot. Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.

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