Sunday, January 20, 2008

A Love Scene Comments

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Sometimes I trick myself into believing I can smell you
and I let the moonlight slip through my fingers
death has no stronger a hold on me than you do
but my thoughts have wings and they fly to you
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shannon wright
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Kefentse Sathekge 07 January 2009

powerful yet humble words. i love your closing lines.

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Roger Cornish 28 January 2008

Often less is........................ MORE! and this is! Rogerx.

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Malini Kadir 22 January 2008

Sometimes I trick myself into believing I can smell you and I let the moonlight slip through my fingers......... ........................I love these lines.......

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