A Love's Game Comments

Once you were the moon And I was the sun, I was a gardener And you a beautiful rose... You were the diamond And I was the ring... Two bodies, one soul The start seems right I thought you did find the One! ..for..true love..I thnk I need not to expect but give!

Warm, captivating and completely writing.Many memorable lines in this one. Poetry is certainly in your blood. Thank you for sharing.Mari.

Great poem - touch of sadness in an otherwise sweet poem. Reality can ruin fantasy. Close to my heart right now. Thanks for sharing

ravages of time...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

i find it so close to hearts great work mister romio keep it up 10+++

A fine poem.. fun reading

Great job and thanks for commenting on my poem this was a really good poem

Lovin the rhyme scheme. Made an average story more than acceptable.8/10.

A well penned write, it's beautifally readable...and caputures the blend of reality. Nicely done.10/10

Hi Romeo A nice work and readable..and strenuous..too. well done..10

Two hearts, like lovers meet...coincidentally, from the start. Until a spark of a togetherness shared and undeniably dependent on one another. For one a game! For the other, a repeated need. Nice work, Romeo.

Since it was just your game You tried to drive me insane But little did you know Things drastically have changed For, I am far from being the same... Now, we are heading some where But not on the same lane... Fantastic lines; full of rythm and rhyme...I simply loved its flow and the meanigfullness that you convey very assertively in this poem..10/10

What a relationship, going to the gutter I supposed. Well penned 10+

a love, s game never ends. its memmory will haunt you. a wonderful poem. voted10 surya

Fabulous written poem of love's game! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++

This is a fantastic poem..so rich, , , Great title too...voted 10++ Merna, ,

This is a wonderful poem of great imaginations with a blend of reality about love. Beautifully rhymed and very well written, Romeo.........10/10. Regards Naseer