A Love's Desire Comments

‘…Should I give up // Love's matters // And retire? …’ No never because thro’ no answer is a kind of answer…LOVE is undying... Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

This is a touching piece in which one seeks an answer to the loss of love. Nice piece!

it is stunt advertising..Romeo really a good poem 10+

Should I give up nice sad confessional surrealistic poem, very well written 10++++++++++

AWESOME! ! ! good and smooth flowing i liked it -10 anjali

Deep desires painted with passion....

Sweet, a blessed read indeed.. it was touching for me personally cause it kind of outlined the very situation i am in right now... so thank you it was very nice.10+

this is a wonderful poem nice work keep the hard work up love tears us all apart but few how can get over anything remains, and i'm not one of them i gave you 10 i really like it

Well expressed....Nice flow good job

wow..well done i really like it.love is so DESIREable i mean its so passionate. it leaves you breathless..

Love is a strong bond and you gave us a fine proof out of this elegy.

'In my desperate need To know of your whereabouts, I asked the moon about you And it turned its back on me' I love the first part of this verse - it's stunning in its simplicity. This is a beautiful poem - thank you for sharing. Danielle

Very passionate and romantic story, don't forget that you are a great poet, never stop writting. There is love in every coner, you may just not no were to look, Soon the moon will give a response of you eternal soulmate, Juliet She who is you eternal enemy (if you no the story) So never give up on love it will soon come to you.

wow that was sweet and sad i think that no matter what love will be found if you just believe good job!