Thursday, November 3, 2011

A Love's Confession Comments

Rating: 4.9

I can not give you less than me,
Except for the future, no more,
With a head so heavy now,
When I seem unlike myself
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Romeo Della Valle
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T. R. Crissian 28 November 2011

A beautiful poem... very touching. It reminds me of a winter day sky- gray but every so lovely..... such feeling. You poured feeling into this poem- that is how all poems (and books) should be like......

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Lenore Lee 15 November 2011

Awh, like Lexlie said all females are waiting for someone as sweet and romantic as you to say that to them. Peace and love always! Lenore Lee, from Sydney, Australia

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Kaila George 15 November 2011

Who ever she was...shes lucky...its beautiful and poetic...crys...(tears of joy) girls are allowed to cry at beautiful poetry....sigh...that was brillant...heart felt...and touching, so heart felt.

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(De Va) 14 November 2011

touching to the depths of love......ty for sharing...I did so enjoy reading it...smiles n blessings

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Lexie Bousman 12 November 2011

That is a beautiful poem i am still waiting for a man to say that to me

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Miemi Azmi Jamal 09 November 2011

love love love.... what are we to become without love. I feel very light reading this, floating even....just like how you feel listening to John Lennon.... without a doubt the free sprite seems so shine brighter in these words. amazing :)

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Theodora Onken 07 November 2011

Wow, this is so deep and so beautiful...each line new enlightment. Love, love, the way that you write! Theodora Onken

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Nicole Middendorf 07 November 2011

This is beautiful! I think that you will be famous some day, Romeo,

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

your poetic feeling itself expresses your love's confession. Don't be afraid at all And give Love and Peace a chance... and this world will be heaven

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Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

loved it! ! ! ! ! Beholding a beautiful sight Of Love and Peace for always these words sounds suits to ears! ! ! ! ! cheers for your work.God bless you! ! ! ! ! !

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Bella Hernandez 04 November 2011

amazingly beautiful poem. again you out did yourself just amazed what a confession you just gave ~Bella

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Richard McClellan 03 November 2011

I can tell this poems comes from the heart and has some closeness with you... A very good poem... I like it.

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Ghost Writer Insomnis 03 November 2011

Indeed my friend: out of the abundance of the heart, poems do speak. We travel through life wanting and needing the deliberate love of another. what we find is an education to develop strength within out character, to carry on. A broken heart reveals our closest secrets unburdened to God, who will then attempt to put us back together. Should we listen hard enough we will encounter the means by which 'TRUE LOVE' has been created individually, for each heart that determines to be whole. True Love will always give one hundred percent of all three involved; God First and then those in love. You stand no chance at all If your creator is not present at the creation of your love with another..... Selah....

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Dan Leo 03 November 2011

Wow, the honesty of a future hearts will, and viewing of a past, surely one of the greatest writings comes not from a deliberate write but ones own experiences.

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Crimson Love 03 November 2011

This is a beautiful love poem, the descriptive words you used painted flawless images. Truly magnificent! ! ! :)

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