Friday, November 7, 2008

A Love Restricted Comments

Rating: 2.5

What can I write? What can I say?
So tired, so sleepy... The teacher’s voice drones on and on
I can barely keep my eyes open
Heat has overcome me
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Chantelle Nixon
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Chocolate Bunny 07 November 2008

Another great one. There is a lot of imagery in this one. I liked the part about the eyes. I can tell you really loved him through this one. You are a great writer.

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