Wednesday, March 22, 2017

A Love Poem (Ljubavna) Comments

Rating: 4.5

You know, Dinko is not guility
because you are burned by the Moon
and you threw a Love in the Universe
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Nermin Delic
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Unwritten Soul 24 March 2017

Dinko is your friend? ...sorry but my poor, it must be someone name is it ;) i like the rawness of the poem, it create such a vulnerable feeling but i love these particular lines 1.because you are burned by the Moon 2.and you threw a Love in the Universe 3.when you bury a dead autumn These are very provoking to my imagination. Keep it up for more poems

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2017

Good start. Carry on. Thanks.

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Nermin Delic 23 March 2017

Thank you very much, Jazib!

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Rebecca Lyle 22 March 2017

Lovely write, would like to see more of your writings, my friend.

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Nermin Delic 23 March 2017

Thank you very much, Rebecca!

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Nermin Delic 23 March 2017

Thank you a lot, Rebecca!

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Bugojno, Bosnia and Herzegovina
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