Friday, February 23, 2007

A Love Poem Comments

Rating: 4.1

Instead of cleverly manipulating language
Just these words for you, my darling

I am.
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Cia Frizzell
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To truly love Even words are unnecessary All it need is a glance Even on its fiftieth anniversary.... Good poem and I invite you to my page too

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Amber Gordan 19 October 2009

i lovethis poem, short but sweet. 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Wow, I cute short love poem. Nice, nice, very nice.10...

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I don't know, or perhaps I do, why I simply need to keep returning to this. t x

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Frank Cannon 03 August 2008

I cannot say I love you for I know you not enough. But I hunger for your poetry thus I wait here at this trough. So sharpen that 2B pencil girl and once more strut your stuff.

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Bill Thomas 23 May 2008

Oh wow. You turn so much traditional poetry on its head & produce the ultimate poem about something ineffable - thank you.

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James B. Earley 16 March 2008

It's interesting that often so many of the most poignant of messages are uttered in so few words! Thanks.

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Neil Marsden 26 January 2008

Take comfort in the knowledge that anyone scoring less than a 10 for this is clearly missing the point! Brilliant. Neil.

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Yen Cress 19 October 2007

Only a true poet could have done this! It's beautiful! Yen

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Rommel Filoteo 11 October 2007

very little words but it can touch someones inner self. i like it a lot. God bless!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 October 2007

yet beautifully raved, lovely one,

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 24 September 2007

mhhhh good, very good.

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Instead of cleverly manipulating language I'll just say... aw! and, aw! and awe. t x

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R H 13 August 2007

Simplicity speaks volumes... Love this Cia. jz

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love is a silence of the morgue needs no words featherlsess flights of fancy of dying birds love a dead meat sold by street vendors to dead panned cybernetic nerds poetic pestilence of pompous turds

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Not a member No 6 18 June 2007

Simply stunning. liz

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Elysabeth Faslund 13 June 2007

I am. You are. Love is....any questions? Didn't think so. No questions needed for this one...self contained to the max. I'm going to copy this and tape it to my computer screen, just to remind me how utterly simple beauty can be.xxxElysabeth

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Marci Made 09 June 2007

This is the best way to say 'I Love You' that I've seen or heard in years. WOW ~~~~~marci.m.

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Lauren Egger 29 May 2007

This is really interesting, i've never read anything like it before but it all makes sence. I love it, good job! : ]

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Chris Mendros 08 May 2007

Concise and strong. Nice work.

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