Instead of cleverly manipulating language
Just these words for you, my darling
I am.
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Wow, I cute short love poem. Nice, nice, very nice.10...
I don't know, or perhaps I do, why I simply need to keep returning to this. t x
I cannot say I love you for I know you not enough. But I hunger for your poetry thus I wait here at this trough. So sharpen that 2B pencil girl and once more strut your stuff.
Oh wow. You turn so much traditional poetry on its head & produce the ultimate poem about something ineffable - thank you.
It's interesting that often so many of the most poignant of messages are uttered in so few words! Thanks.
Take comfort in the knowledge that anyone scoring less than a 10 for this is clearly missing the point! Brilliant. Neil.
very little words but it can touch someones inner self. i like it a lot. God bless!
Instead of cleverly manipulating language I'll just say... aw! and, aw! and awe. t x
love is a silence of the morgue needs no words featherlsess flights of fancy of dying birds love a dead meat sold by street vendors to dead panned cybernetic nerds poetic pestilence of pompous turds
I am. You are. Love is....any questions? Didn't think so. No questions needed for this one...self contained to the max. I'm going to copy this and tape it to my computer screen, just to remind me how utterly simple beauty can be.xxxElysabeth
This is the best way to say 'I Love You' that I've seen or heard in years. WOW ~~~~~marci.m.
This is really interesting, i've never read anything like it before but it all makes sence. I love it, good job! : ]
To truly love Even words are unnecessary All it need is a glance Even on its fiftieth anniversary.... Good poem and I invite you to my page too