You and me
Me and you
Flower-bee
Grass and dew.
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Adorable Love Poem, concise but crystal clear and cutest composed.
Beautifuly writen. The image u ink with few words is vivid and elegant. Thanks for sharing
wow excellent combination grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me....... yeah really GOD created us paired.
Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem.
This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love.
Dear Daniel Brick, it is the best comment I have ever had on my poem. Your comment is very brilliant, explanation, very minute; and expression, very poetic. I just love it.
একটি প্রেমের কবিতা: তুমি আর আমি আমি আর তুমি যেন পুষ্প-ভ্রমর তৃণ আর শিশির । বঙ্গানুবাদ করেছেন- মাসুমা আখতার রুমা
Nice poem that twined between two lovers, Thank for sharing.
Very interesting poem of love. i were heared this poem from your voice. i am your student of sirajganj gov.t college.
Powerful and meaningful words captured nicely in 4 verses, nice poem.
The passion that is love embracing nature with the truth that shines from your eyes! Beautiful write!
It is a nice piece of poem. I listen to this poem today. This poet is also one of my favorite poet and favorite teacher. So I like him most.
Thank you, dear Sylvia. Nice comment. Grateful to you.