Monday, June 20, 2011

A Love Poem Comments

Rating: 2.9

You and me
Me and you
Flower-bee
Grass and dew.
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Sayeed Abubakar
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Sayeed Abubakar 21 August 2020

Thank you, dear Sylvia. Nice comment. Grateful to you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 July 2020

Adorable Love Poem, concise but crystal clear and cutest composed.

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A B Faniki 24 September 2019

Beautifuly writen. The image u ink with few words is vivid and elegant. Thanks for sharing

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 May 2018

so simple brief and so beautiful grass me bee dew and u

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 August 2018

Nice comment. Thank you very much. Stay happy.

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Britte Ninad 15 May 2018

wow excellent combination grass with dew, flower with bee and you with me....... yeah really GOD created us paired.

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Sayeed Abubakar 22 May 2018

Nice comment and good evaluation. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Inseparable and made for each other....Simple yet deep in meaning. Short and awesome love poem.

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Sayeed Abubakar 04 September 2016

Thanks a lot. I feel inspired.

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Daniel Brick 07 July 2016

This is an extremely compressed poem but I find two themes concerning L-O-V-E expressed brilliantly; FIRST, love means two into one, a union of two and the imagery expresses this with two natural relationships, THAT IS, the bee and the flower & grass and dew. These natural relationships are inevitable and thus the imagery imparts that inevitability to love. SECOND, The lovers are not named except by generic pronouns, which emphasizes the universality of love.

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Sayeed Abubakar 07 July 2016

Dear Daniel Brick, it is the best comment I have ever had on my poem. Your comment is very brilliant, explanation, very minute; and expression, very poetic. I just love it.

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Mehnoor Rizvi 04 April 2016

Briefly written but says all between two lovers..

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Brilliant comment.

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Sayeed Abubakar 02 March 2016

একটি প্রেমের কবিতা: তুমি আর আমি আমি আর তুমি যেন পুষ্প-ভ্রমর তৃণ আর শিশির । বঙ্গানুবাদ করেছেন- মাসুমা আখতার রুমা

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Masuma translated it into Bengali

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Galina Italyanskaya 21 January 2016

So simple and so profound! Just brilliant!

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Sayeed Abubakar 21 January 2016

Your comment so simple but great too.

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Savita Tyagi 19 January 2016

Lovely write. Sums up the life.

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Sayeed Abubakar 19 January 2016

Thanks, Savita Tyagi. I like your comment very much.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 15 January 2016

Nice poem that twined between two lovers, Thank for sharing.

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Sayeed Abubakar 19 January 2016

Lovely comment. You comment is always nice.

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md monir 06 April 2015

Very interesting poem of love. i were heared this poem from your voice. i am your student of sirajganj gov.t college.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Good. Your comment is nice

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Powerful poem on love and it is beautiful

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Shish Mohammad 15 October 2013

Ir's called spontaneous overflow of powerful feeling.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Yes, It is that

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Powerful and meaningful words captured nicely in 4 verses, nice poem.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Excellent. A nice comment

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Hazel Durham 28 April 2013

The passion that is love embracing nature with the truth that shines from your eyes! Beautiful write!

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Many many thanks, dear Hazel for your nice comment

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Spiritual Seeker 27 January 2013

I can rhyme it the whole day. Excellent. a 10.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Oh really? You are so great!

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 November 2012

Simple and awesome with beautiful relation.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

Thank you very much. I feel inspired

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Zakaria Hossain 09 May 2012

It is a nice piece of poem. I listen to this poem today. This poet is also one of my favorite poet and favorite teacher. So I like him most.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 June 2016

ha ha. Thanks. It's just nice

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