Thursday, September 3, 2009

A Love Poem Comments

Rating: 4.6

(Inspired from the comments of Ian Bowen)

I love you darling this is true
I crave your body language
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stephen stirk
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Chuck Audette 04 February 2010

f'n hilarious! ! ! -chuck

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James S Newcomb Lang 18 December 2009

I read this allowed to my girlfriend and it had the desired affect! She appreciated my love poetry more! Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 26 November 2009

'I'll love you always pet' Rachel Ann Butler

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David Harris 23 October 2009

Stephen, this one is priceless. The song that Jack mentioned is If You Wanna Be Happy and it is by Jimmy Soul. I know as I have it and I married one. Mine looks like Nora Batty minus the wrinkly stockings. Loved this one. Top marks from me my friend and thanks for sharing it. All the best David

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Jack Williams 20 October 2009

A poem that would be a surprise if it were written by anybody else. Also an excellent response by Robert E Hann! Anybody heard the song, I think sung by Percy Sledge, which goes, 'Man, if you want a happy life; You've got to make an ugly woman your wife'?

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Robert E Hann 01 October 2009

Some lovers make you happy, others cause pain and strife. Now I know what happened to my once and former wife!

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Sans Serif 16 September 2009

....Lol. That was hilarious. Funny and sweet. Kind of. Enjoyable. Definite 10!

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 September 2009

You know what, first the title attracted me.. 'Love Poem'.. hmmmm..Just out of curiosity turned to this one to see what you have to say about love...Well I expected a shock and I got it.. Well, very good poem. I should say, a very delicious poem.. I am still feeling the effects of Stirk's love potion.. very entertaining.. Good.. cheers shan

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Robert Jaffray 14 September 2009

lol............a very clever and witty poem

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Georgia Girl 14 September 2009

OY VEY! ! ! now that's what you call love and ACCEPTANCE LOL..10

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T S 04 September 2009

Amazing write...... and I wonder how many of us know someone like this 10 plus......Tracy

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Linda Ori 04 September 2009

OMG! This is priceless, Steve! Done with just the right amount of delightful sarcasm. Your mind is a bit off kilter, I would guess. But it's to your advantage when you can write something like this. Thanks for the laugh! Linda ; -)

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Fay Slimm 03 September 2009

A fresh viewpoint of the love; poem if ever I saw one Steve - a comedy though in a few verses you had me in stitiches.....10 and more from Fay....

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Carol Gall 03 September 2009

applause best love poem ever 1

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Lynda Robson 03 September 2009

It seems Ian is inspiring us all, a different slant here on the usual love poem, very touching Steve (i don't think) lol, loved it, 10 Lynda xx

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maggie murray 03 September 2009

He he Stephen, that'll teach him...lol...Maggie

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