Sunday, May 6, 2007

A Love Now Lost Comments

Rating: 4.9

What was once a blossomed love,
Now seems old and tired.
You're not the person I used to know,
The one I once admired.
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Twilight Whispers
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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

Beautiful, thanks

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Lucianne Fasolo 07 October 2007

This reminds me of the poems I wrote when I was your age, : P Great job, I really liked it!

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Phats Li 05 September 2007

this sounds like how i feel! ! ...thanks again! ! ....sandra

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Elysabeth Faslund 29 July 2007

You are way too good for being so young! Either that, or your wisdom outweighs your years. This is exceptionally good! I'm glad I looked through the online members! ! ! Good going! ! xxElysabeth

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