What was once a blossomed love,
Now seems old and tired.
You're not the person I used to know,
The one I once admired.
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This reminds me of the poems I wrote when I was your age, : P Great job, I really liked it!
You are way too good for being so young! Either that, or your wisdom outweighs your years. This is exceptionally good! I'm glad I looked through the online members! ! ! Good going! ! xxElysabeth
Beautiful, thanks