A Love Not Returned, A Heart That Still Yearns... Comments

Written from your heart Elizabeth, men to, have a one sided love!

All the ruminations of a one-sided love have been well-expressed. The pain is tangible.

malarkey and sentimental dross. nothing interesting with language going on here...

An intensely and poetically expressed scenario that too many of us are too well acquainted with. That makes it no less painful. And a cure isn't guaranteed. Young love cuts deep. Excellent writing.

I am beginning to think we all suffer the same problems. You are a romantic, but love is cruel, and fickle, my heart's been broken too many times, there's nothing left of it to yearn. I like your poem!

a very beautiful, well writen poem that really does come from the heart.

wow is the only word i can say to describe what i thought of this poem i enjoyed reading it *Felicia*