Thursday, March 22, 2007

A Love Lost Comments

Rating: 4.8

Withering dead from the mid afternoon heat
As flame to charcoal, igniting into a furious defeat
Pain initiated from within expels into the spring time air
Spreading my anger, my hate, and all of my despair
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Nyrical Poet
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Little Mo 13 April 2007

It's never too late..time moves fast I grant you that, but its never too late!

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Jennifer Her 30 March 2007

realy nice thanks for sharing^^

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Jennifer Her 30 March 2007

realy nice thanks for sharing^^

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Alison Smith 22 March 2007

Such the pain of fear of taking that next step... nice write Alison

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Patricia Gale 22 March 2007

Eating a pound or two of regret tastes worst than no courage. Beautifully sad piece, well penned.

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