Tuesday, March 15, 2005

A Love Letter Sent To Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

To you honey,
may you rest in the same peace
I had when we were together
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Ivy Christou
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Will Barber 07 May 2006

This is lovely, and lyrical - 'dance until my knees hurt worse than my dry eyes' blew me away - the dancing, the song, the single kisses - I loved it all.

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Linda Preston 01 April 2005

Hello Ivy, First time I've read your poetry - I like this one kind of wistful - your english is very good. Don't think you need to repeat the word 'miserable twice' though

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Ivy Schex 30 March 2005

Please tell me, what does it mean? Your admirer, Ivy

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William Mae 16 March 2005

very touching, very heartfelt, you are one good writer, I can't believe how great your ideas are for poetry, your good.

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