Friday, January 1, 2016
A Love Letter Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Mother says I'm grown up;
Grown up I must be
Because these days my mind misbehaves,
Misbehaves in ways a little girl cannot see.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
01 January 2016
Brightening the life's day with love and affection of wisdom is very nice and interesting definitely. Wisely penned.10
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7/23/2025 3:48:05 PM # 1.0.0
Well miss Suchi, this is definitely an improvement on you previous poems! :) this poem displays a greater control and mastery of words and emotions, and ooh I can simply taste the pain when she says She might sing nicely to your Spanish guitar But I sing too, better better by far. The conflict between the need to express her anguish and yet not to come off as needy and desperate is strong and beautifully dealt with. Overall, a successful attempt at the dramatic monologue form! Keep it up girl! ; 3
This is by far the best review I have ever received an its nothing short of amazing. Thanks a ton for your close-reading. I means a lot to me.: D: D