Friday, October 10, 2008

A Love (La Isla Flamenco) Comments

Rating: 4.8

(dedicated to Ms. Chitra Lele, a poet friend at poemhunter)

I have been thinking
All night long
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Surayya Abbas 06 June 2009

Lovely poem. Well written.Nice to read.

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rago rago 18 February 2009

i enjoyed reading of urs....... great piece.....well narrated poem......feel good that u are dedicated this to ur friend

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Catrina Heart 16 February 2009

Brilliance in composition for our fellow writers...Ms. Chitra Lele one of the greatest and pioneer poets here i guess in PH...10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

very nice poem.thanks for sharing.

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Ency Bearis 14 February 2009

a good poem..well narrated...a great piece

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Seema Aarella 14 February 2009

A good poem...very expressive and emotive! ! ! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 February 2009

A more good love song

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Chitra - 14 February 2009

well expressed.. Excellent work

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Ben Gieske 16 December 2008

I like the first part very much until “I hear the Cleveland Orchestra”. I get sort of tangled up in what you were saying and what you are saying after this.

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Soffi Bawahab 05 November 2008

It touch my heart. It's a very lovely poem. I do still believe in love..

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Alison Cassidy 24 October 2008

Your obvious love of music (as shown by references to famous musical works) is evident in the musical nature of your poetry. Your phrasing is thoroughly satisfying and the flow of your poetry is most appealing. I can't help comparing your work to that of Nimal Dunuhinga. Your two unique poetic voices have much in common. A quirky approach to language, an incredibly fluent way with words and a refreshingly unusual perspective on life. Your 'Love' is sublime. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 October 2008

If there is no love there is no mankind. God created love in everyone's heart, which one should search inside the heart.

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Carl Harris 19 October 2008

This very moving and most expressive poem was a delight to read, Ahmad, and I felt it had a very Poe-like quality to it as well. In his earlier poems, written while he was still young, he wrote of the mysterious quality of love, just as this superb poem does. The repetition of your poem's beginning at the end was a nice touch. Carl.

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Seema Chowdhury 11 October 2008

A bouquet of hope in my heart......... excellent poem. thank you for sharing this lovely poem with me.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 October 2008

fine! well expressed........10+ (do read mine 'This is love speaking')

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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