(dedicated to Ms. Chitra Lele, a poet friend at poemhunter)
I have been thinking
All night long
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i enjoyed reading of urs....... great piece.....well narrated poem......feel good that u are dedicated this to ur friend
Brilliance in composition for our fellow writers...Ms. Chitra Lele one of the greatest and pioneer poets here i guess in PH...10+++
I like the first part very much until “I hear the Cleveland Orchestra”. I get sort of tangled up in what you were saying and what you are saying after this.
It touch my heart. It's a very lovely poem. I do still believe in love..
Your obvious love of music (as shown by references to famous musical works) is evident in the musical nature of your poetry. Your phrasing is thoroughly satisfying and the flow of your poetry is most appealing. I can't help comparing your work to that of Nimal Dunuhinga. Your two unique poetic voices have much in common. A quirky approach to language, an incredibly fluent way with words and a refreshingly unusual perspective on life. Your 'Love' is sublime. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
If there is no love there is no mankind. God created love in everyone's heart, which one should search inside the heart.
This very moving and most expressive poem was a delight to read, Ahmad, and I felt it had a very Poe-like quality to it as well. In his earlier poems, written while he was still young, he wrote of the mysterious quality of love, just as this superb poem does. The repetition of your poem's beginning at the end was a nice touch. Carl.
A bouquet of hope in my heart......... excellent poem. thank you for sharing this lovely poem with me.
fine! well expressed........10+ (do read mine 'This is love speaking')
Lovely poem. Well written.Nice to read.