Tuesday, June 1, 2010

A Love Healing Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am feeling lots of pain
I am in her passionate love chain
My body is running through her beautiful flames
My soul is crying in mercy for her gain
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Gregory PierreJerome
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 July 2010

‘I’m Yours Only and Alone’ ~ poetry…with all the calorie of romantic elements and metaphors…she will surely come…and warmly embrace you with a romantic diamonded psychic brace… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 30 June 2010

Gosh Gregory, such striking images and pleasing rhythms and rhymes makes your poem just ooze love from the 1st to the last stanza...just lovely and a solid 10++++

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Sherri Coulter 03 June 2010

Wow, this is truly a cool poem, loved the flow off my tongue as I read it...10..nice!

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