You showered love on him as-if
the sun embraces younger earth
with all her affection unhindered
never thinking for even a second
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a very nice poem.the last two lines are so unexpected and the effect of the poem is good, i mean it surprises in the end.
Hi Putholi - This is poetry written from the heart - lovely,
Dear Putholi, You are on the basic topic of love.Some good imageries are working here to elaborate your message. The last two lines are nicely crafted. Liked it. Rated high. May I suggest why not become a word-thrift? Use them in a rationing manner. Go for some infinitive or gerund and let the reader have their own conclusion Rajkumar.
You are embodiment of love. For all those days I was the moon, a satellite the sun could never have had..............wow! ! wonderful write eloquently flowing through ingenuity, quite interesting too,10+++, thanks for sharing
a good poem with great imagery 10/10 :)