Sunday, September 30, 2018

A Love Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

She ran after love
Making dreams her sweet home
Time passed,
Yet no love,
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Sandra Feldman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2022

FIVE Stars for this precious Love poem.Having reread this precious gem, this thrilling Masterpiece, I have got power to roam again, not to Rome in vain, but to the most Beautiful Land of Poetry

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hannah 13 November 2019

i love the poems you write i wrote one to my crush and now he is my boyfriend.πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•β€β€β™₯β™₯β™₯

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 October 2018

I love this poem through and through, such a thought-provoking poem at its smartest rendered, it contains a bit irony and that sets the poem on fire! All lifeΒ΄s ingredients are in this poem and see how powerful the poem has become. And my favourite subject is love, fantasy or not, it IS love, such an entertaining, but truly sad poem of great melancholy and sadness, indeed Sandra, this sad love so magnificently created, love your way of creating

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Sandra Feldman 17 September 2019

Beautiful analysis and feeling for this poem which I appreciste very much. So glad you liked it. That's what poetry is for, to please all that do the poet the great favor and grace of reading what they write. Thanks a million, dear Sylvia! Much obliged!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2022

For my dearest Sandra, I have added a new response, This poem is not A Love Fantasy but the truth. Marvelous!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2018

Sandra, such a well crafted poem.....10++++

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