Friday, October 17, 2014

A Love Divine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love, brought to me by a stranger,
Like the tide, washed over my heart,
Waves of contentment swept my shore,
A reef of darkness, ripped apart
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Lora Colon
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Carl Roussell 08 January 2019

This is really good writing - the last stanza is so cool! !

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Manonton Dalan 17 January 2016

wow! love with sweet ending... gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! ! ! !

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A beautiful Poem about Love, I love it!

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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2014

This is such a wonderful poem! I haven't read one like this for a long time. Loved the feelings, loved the expression, loved the choice of words and loved the rhyme. All in all, a superb poem.10/10.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 04 November 2014

He offered me his loving heart, Tenderly, he joined it to mine, An angel then kissed my forehead As witness to a love divine A beautiful and lovely love poem which enthrals the audience and take them along from beginning to end.Keep the good job up. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 04 November 2014

He brought life to my dying dreams, And soon, a wounded heart was healed, I caught a glimpse of Paradise..... When I thought Eden's gates were sealed Beautiful love poem communicating feelings of love in true perspective. I really enjoyed it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 October 2014

love comes from strange quarters to fill the heart seeking it. a deep and lovely write, Lora.

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David Lessard 18 October 2014

Wonderful and enchanting.

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Heather Wilkins 17 October 2014

a beautiful write about love divine nicely brought to life

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 October 2014

Love is divine and Love for Divine is great. God only brings a creature on Earth. Nice writing.

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Lora Colon

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