Sunday, November 16, 2014

A Love Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

The welfare trust has many stories,
I can tell you one that shattered my heart,
A boy of twenty grown up in the trust,
Never knew his parents but was keen to know,
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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

He was grown up as a living robot, .............all orphans bear the same grief...great write sir

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Heather Wilkins 17 November 2014

a story well told so sad and heart breaking plays with ones emotions

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 November 2014

A heart touching poem...............10

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Saheb Mohapatra 17 November 2014

emotions at their best............well composed...........thanks

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Hazel Durham 16 November 2014

A sad and thought provoking write what a terrible chain of events, that boy found out the truth that will set him free to know he was wanted, but what happened to that poor woman was too hard for her to bear! Beautiful write!

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Bisma Mirza 16 November 2014

I really like this poem..... Best (y) Beautiful one

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