I remember
How we danced on a bridge
One magical morning
Saturday night still hovering in the air
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Great images brought to life by your words....thank you...Fi
A wonderfully poetic desciption of Our Love - - and the askew, sideways use of word using the evocative memories, is very attractive in this piece....... a great verse..... thank you....... more please.....10 from Fay.
I really like how descriptive this poem is, I can see it clearly in my mind's eye. A very beautiful work, written beautifully and sadly. Well done. A 10 and beyond.
Nicely penned, but really depressing. Caused a bit melencholy. it's because the the way you have painted the picture. Lost love is very painful. wonderful poem.10+++
A little bit of sweetness, all wrapped in the magic