Wednesday, January 14, 2009

* A Love By Default Comments

Rating: 3.0

I remember
How we danced on a bridge
One magical morning
Saturday night still hovering in the air
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Deva De Silva
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ngaio beck 18 January 2009

A little bit of sweetness, all wrapped in the magic

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

Great images brought to life by your words....thank you...Fi

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Fay Slimm 16 January 2009

A wonderfully poetic desciption of Our Love - - and the askew, sideways use of word using the evocative memories, is very attractive in this piece....... a great verse..... thank you....... more please.....10 from Fay.

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Hope Wallin 14 January 2009

I really like how descriptive this poem is, I can see it clearly in my mind's eye. A very beautiful work, written beautifully and sadly. Well done. A 10 and beyond.

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 14 January 2009

Nicely penned, but really depressing. Caused a bit melencholy. it's because the the way you have painted the picture. Lost love is very painful. wonderful poem.10+++

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