Wednesday, February 3, 2010

A Love Away Comments

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I awake to the sun of the sombre morn,
ten thousand pieces my heart is torn,
like fallen petals on a windy land,
and parting kisses blown by my hand.
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mark anthony st. rose
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Mustafa M 03 February 2010

i really like this, good job. keep it up.

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i find in your poems, you don't hind what you really feel and that's what true poets do. they don't hide a thing. i really enjoyed you poem. it deserves a 13+. and i hope to read more of you in the furture to come byes.

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