Monday, May 13, 2013

A Love Affair With Moon! Comments

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Oh, that gorgeous, smiley crescent
Again surfaced in the gloomy, empty sky
Eyes gaze untiringly, as if discovered just now
Newness explored in my mundane life.
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Frank (popeye) Pulver 25 November 2013

Too me the moonless night is the darkness of the heart, and moon light is the light of the heart. It is your dream that will always be you to the heart of your heart. The love affair with love

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2013

4th stanza - Óh, my dearest........not to leave me alone. fabulous. you are my soul and soul mate. amazing imagination. must never stop romancing coz this is life and so to survive. xlent.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 14 May 2013

...I never wish to go on moon, Coz' then I can't see him, will I survive? ..... Good it feels to hear but much hard to bear by a lover who loves madly his/her beloved.... They would get shock perhaps by getting such doctrine........ The moon-poem otherwise written well.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 14 May 2013

If it could be captured, if it could be forever held, what would happen to all others who look upon the moons gazing light? Forever to be followed by a darkness. A castle created just for her. A body of such delight, such might, how could one be held down so tight. Would it be wrong? Would it be selfish to leave the stars wanting? An empty void in each of there hearts, Do they dim? No longer so bright, a faded twinkle. What would it do the skies as we know them. Loved Your Poem, Thanks for sharing.

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