On that November noon, as we drove in
To my home town, at the foot of Shivalik hills.
I realised, why it is so close to my heart,
This is where my parents gave me a start.
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wondeful poem, nicely curved by remniscence with amazing imagery and metaphor.style of write is of unique genre, but i am speech less by the beauty of theme,10+++++,5hanks for sharing
The beauty of this poem is that there is a calm satisfaction in the life spent in that lovely town, , , , that is your gain i think, , , well spoken and composed, ,10
nostalgia personified...mounted on memories of the city and its charms very vividly expressed!
Wow, what a refreshing poem, an Ode to a city. As I am in Hisar and visited Chandigarh many times, I can feel it through the poem. And especially 'would like to settle here if i could...' is a true feeling which comes to everyones heart and mind when they visit the city of Goddess Chandi.
Such a delicious relaxing poem, Mamta, of revisiting the past. I loved it! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
I have never been to your side of the world...have never been to India...tho' i have many, many Indian friends...But after reading this fine piece of literature...if i am fortunate enough to be able to visit your most intruiging country....my first stop will surely be Chandighar...Excellent Penning, Ms. Author! FjR
a write good and pleasing to read on your city of love, Mamta...the context you bring in and your invitation to the poem are really impressive...10
an excellent write ma'am with a very strong and unique metaphor style indeed and you have written the poem so beautifully that readers can see and feel the sights and sound of your memories through your wonderful words, bravo bravo....thanks 10++++ rgds asif