The green branch I saw
ascending with a naughty intention
to titillate the clouds full of love,
perhaps the shy clouds were reluctant
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A wonderful poem of great depth. Highly imaginative write. I liked how the great Poet thought about the bowing of heads before the One Above likened to a tree after the rain..A very unique and clever thought. The picture of the one who became a part of the scenery enhances the beauty and cleverness of this write Another wonderful poem from a great mind.
Exceptionally fascinating scenery and personification. Thanks, Akhtar sahab.
Some extraordinary lines in this brilliant write. Thank you for your praiseworthy comments.
I am now doubtful who copied the way of bowing in thankfulness The trees or us? - - - - - - - -An excellent observation of nature and a lovely poem.