Tuesday, June 30, 2015

A Lot Of Fuss About Nothing Comments

Rating: 4.8

He's been making a lot of fuss
He's killed people in mass
It's never been his fault at all
On his parents's side is the ball
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Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe)
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Roseann Shawiak 01 February 2016

Insightful self-realization can come about when trying to live right, yet it's difficult to change without taking the blame. Very good poem, great message! ! 10+ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 02 July 2015

Sincerely speaking, I believe that one must be able to come to terms with the potential for evil that is contained in oneself, except perhaps one has got serious psychological problems. It's a well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. A good poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Thanks indeed Dike... Nice comment.

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